Salesmanship (Short Story)
Author:
Jack Ewing
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Synopsis: Eleven-year-old Travis has learned to be
glib in the process of selling his mother’s handmade products door-to-door to
help contribute to his poverty-stricken family’s finances. Usually, the
seventh-grader only works the immediate twenty-square-block low-rent
neighborhood, where he has become a familiar and unwelcome figure hawking items
of dubious quality to customers with little money to spare and less inclination
to buy.
One evening, Travis and his mom decide to try new territory. They drive across town to an upscale subdivision in an attempt to sell batches of freshly baked chocolate-chip cookies. In the course of the night, young salesman Travis discovers that rich folks have just as many sins to hide as poor people and, better still, that the wealthy are willing to pay to protect their secrets.
One evening, Travis and his mom decide to try new territory. They drive across town to an upscale subdivision in an attempt to sell batches of freshly baked chocolate-chip cookies. In the course of the night, young salesman Travis discovers that rich folks have just as many sins to hide as poor people and, better still, that the wealthy are willing to pay to protect their secrets.
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Review: Salesmanship is only eight pages long.
so I’m not sure how much can be said for the mini-story, but I will start off
by saying this tiny little story managed to do what a few other of the short
stories I’ve read haven’t been able to—pleasantly surprise me!
There isn’t too much characterization or plot build up and no
suspense whatsoever. The story begins interestingly enough and keeps a steady
pace while readers learn about Travis and his mother’s crazy inventions. Travis
is a sweet kid. He loves his mom and respects her. He thinks she’s a little
batty but he’d do anything for his mom and to help bring in income, so he goes
door to door selling his mother’s inventions and concoctions. In Salesmanship, Travis’s mother has baked cookies
for him to sell. Travis doesn’t think they’ll sell since the cookies are burnt
and break easily, so most of the bags hold nothing more than crumbled remains
but he ventures off to do what his mother ask. He travels to the rich district
of Winstead Heights with his mother. The first door Travis knocks on will haunt
his memories.
The last half of page six to the end offered such a nice
little twist that I couldn’t keep from smiling. I had to reread it because I
was so surprised at what had happened. In just two and half pages, the story
turned from innocent to dark. I loved how the author managed to show such a
defining moment in Travis’s life and the secrets behind closed doors in a
subtle twist.
Great little read!
